On Monday it was snowing and mummy told us to look closely at the snow. She told us that we should do snow poems about what the snow was like.
Here is my poem. I hope you like it!
It's Snowing
The snow is falling fast outside
And I am cosy inside.
The snow is going round and round.
And I am swiftly on the ground.
It gracefully makes friends with me.
It turns like stars with dainty marks.
they flutter to our local park.
It turns and spins. And then it wins.
It flies through wind like little pins.
It smiles and then it turns away
and then it goes on holiday
Wow Elsie, what a wonderful poem. There is something magical about watching big snowflakes drifting down and landing on you or just landed on other things. I love your lines "It gracefully makes friends with me" and "It turns and spins. And then it wins." Excellent - 10/10 from me. Love Grandad
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ReplyDeleteLucky you being able to play in the snow! You wrote such a great poem that has so many interesting adjectives and Ayaan even noticed how it rhymed. 1N score you a 10/10 too. Super Effort Elsie! When you return on to NRPS you will have your news day on Friday. We will check your blog every Friday until you get back. We all miss you. Love Mrs Flynn & 1N xxx